GENESIS: Bk1 of The Kingdom Come Series Reviews

GENESIS: Book One of The Kingdom Come Series (All Reviews)

 Ok, Now they're all in one place: Amazon, B&N and Goodreads :) Amazon Customer September 29, 2016 5/5 A great read wit...

Tuesday, July 29, 2014

FaceOFF is BACK and it snuckup on me like a *&^%$#@ Ninja!

So, I missed the first episode and had to go back and watch it, nothing major, you could easily see who was the talent and who had it rough. Not sorry to say it, but the two who got sent home, while they might've had a little more to show, didn't have anywhere near the talent or applied-exp as many of the other cast members.

Ok, EP 2: The Horses as the Line Up already. :)
@cigneutron Is One To Watch.
@dinnarosecima Is dangerous with her paint. Even without going big, watchout for her.
@GeorgeTroester Could Take It All.
@KeaghlanAshley Another dangerous painter.


Everyone else kinda fell into the middle for one reason or another; not that they were bad, just didn't stand out. Most importantly, they survived by not making the horrifically stupid mistake of making a character named after a CLOCK into a RAT. I DON'T CARE that it was also apart of his nickname; not what the judges asked for. His partner skated by only because it wasn't HER idea, but going along with a bad idea is equally an issue in the long run, cause you can't be trusted to speak up about BAD IDEAS and if they go to far, well...you crap the bed.

Finally, the judges—more than once, about 3 or so characters—said it isn't a good idea to play the idea "right on the nose". A lie: The Shark Gangster wasn't on the nose it was IN YOUR FACE, but it's only saving grace was how good it was. So the lesson is, you can play it Right On The Nose, but you've got to execute it masterfully to get away with it. 

FaceOFF

Thursday, July 17, 2014

FIRST 5 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!

Well, I was going to post them here, but when you cut'n'paste things get screwy—also, when you upload it. So, I simply linked it to the Amazon page where you can read; as a bonus, if you like, you can then INSTANTLY buy either the paper or digital copy.

TO READ

Thanks so much and I hope you enjoy,

Wade

How Long would Batman Last in the real World? *My response to this B.A article*


How long would Batman last in the real world?
A brilliant response from Redditor periphery72271 followed shortly. Gotta say, in today's ultra-paranoid world, I absolutely believe this.
"Exactly one month after being coming to the attention of the Federal authorities.
A crazed vigilante is riding around an American city using military grade weaponry and committing crimes against civilians on a record scale? It would not take long at all to deploy the necessary resources to the scene."
The question I have is, how long could Batman avoid Federal attention?
He lives, eats, breathes The Batman: How many automated factors are in place to constantly cover his tracks, w/e little ones he leaves behind? How many programs, servers, networks, companies, false identities, accounts (both foreign and domestic) and countless other factors—in operation 24/7—all with the goal of hiding him? 

Remember, this isn't Joe Dow the Road—member of the local nutty militia—stockpiling shotguns purchased at the local Walmart while bragging about it online to all his militia buddies on FB and all other kinds of social network sites constantly being flagged for keywords.
"Several Blackhawks and Little Birds from the BATF and FBI be orbiting on shifts doing surveillance, waiting for a signal that the unsub has begun activity."
When the time finally comes, what counter measures would Batman have in place?
Presumably, Gotham PD as well as a version of their Local FBI (GBI) would've tried similar things with state authority, state resources...without much luck since now it's gone to the Federal level. 

"He would leave to patrol in the Batmobile, and as soon as his distinctive black vehicle's turbine-driven heat signature was located, a Predator drone would be retasked to orbit and follow. That tango in question is very versatile, active, and potentially lethal when engaged so nothing would be done that night, however every illegal activity he performed would be caught on IR-enhnaced video, incliuding the multitude of assaults, breakings and enterings, trespasses, abuse of public property, use of prohibited weapons, substances and hazardous materials, perhaps even failure to register a motor vehicle and violating speed restrictions, and several counts of obstruction of justice.
His citizen's arrests would be logged and the suspects duly charged in any and all assaults against him, as well, however a few suspects will likely be audited for their willingness to testify both against their compatriots and the vigilante."
I contest this wouldn't happen and the reason why, once under such Federal attention, he would redirect his efforts to getting to the source, either to befriend or "warn" all parties—both an attempt to persuade them to forgo Gotham and leave it to him.

Secondly, as has been the case when drones have been used to find/follow high level priorities, they sometimes get "compromised"—at this point is where I feel Batman would really become the target of the Federal Gov.
"At some point his most recent crime spree will end and he will head for home. The Predator will follow, a barely visible line in the inky black Gotham sky, camera eye recording the Batmobile's every move.
Of course the Batmobile will disappear into some rocky outcropping or waterfall or some other land feature and it's destination will be unknown."
At some point, one way or another, enough pieces would slip through or enough cost would be injured upon the FedGov and a special Federal Task force would be assembled...*maybe people who might end up agreeing with The Batman; perhaps future Heroes*
"The very next day special operations elements of the DoJ will be at the location, planting temblor sensors and concealed cameras. This is Batman so it will be a few days before he uses the same entrance again, but he will, and when he does, the triggering of the sensors will activate the cameras, and FBI analysts will see the long stretch of tunnel inside the entrance and start doing calculations."
 Again, what counter-surveillance/measures would Batman have in place?

IF this point is reached, however long it took, once someone is this close to Batman's trail, priorities would shift again. Final options would be put into place to either avoid detection or End Game.

"The length of the entrance tunnel until loss of focus or a turn will be calculated, and the direction and distance of that stretch of the tunnel will be known. Immediate records will be pulled for every building in the area, and every microsecond of the next day will be spent sifting through the possible combinations of owners, buildings, knowledge wealth and access to technology.
This will continue with each of the Batman's movements, and piece by piece a picture of his activities will become known. Information, bits and pieces will be gleaned from his victims, the various residues from his smoke bombs, gases and shark repellents will be analyzed, the Batarangs and grappling hooks researched down to the atomic scale.
Once there is a database of products and substances, the FBI will start rifling through purchase orders and BATF registrations for shipments of the necessary fuel for his Batmobile, and the explosive charges for his bat-grapples, and the avionics for his missile's warheads, amongst the other detritus he leaves after his battles.
Eventually the source of gear will be deciphered: Wayne Industries, and at that point, the cat is out of the bag." 
 This is where it gets muddy again: How long? What Cost? How much will Batman/Bruce (Wayne Industries) interfere in the gathering, analysis of his identity?
"Wayne's home is within the perimeters of the Batmobile disappearances, and a thermal flyby will reveal he's using the same electricity as an small industrial plant does when only two or three people ever live in that mansion. Analysis of company records will reveal the massive levels of graft and embezzlement required to hijack all these prohibited and classified materials to the mansion, and the deliveries of the materials will tagged and traced."
How long will Wayne wrap up the Gov in Legal injunctions for Corporate Documents, if they even exists or show anything which in any way might lead to his true identity/capture? 

"The is enough evidence to present Bruce Wayne with a warrant for his arrest based on the very least on corporate malfeasance, embezzlement, falsification of tax records, Illegal trafficking of prohibited agents, weapons and substances falsified BATF filings, and aiding and abetting multiple criminal acts."
However the information ever gets out, either Batman's failure to completely hide himself or just the eventual success of those against him, once this information is out, the End Game will begin; but Gotham will become a War Zone: Anyone who wanted to know who Batman was, to due him harm, would now have the information to do so.

"Since he is an important personage in the city, they'll do him the favor of sending one very polite agent armed with a single piece of paper, to wait in his office"
Since later outside "non realistic" elements of the DC Universe are introduced, I suggest at this point, or perhaps somewhere earlier on, people like Lex Luthor would become aware of the Gov interest in The Batman. So, to gain the losses of Wayne Enterprises, Lex would filter this information to unknown affiliates in Gotham. Leading, in part, to the War Zone.

"What happens after that is up to him."
 Unlike in the movie, Batman wouldn't willing turn himself in; as much as he's awesome, he's also crazy.

"Conversely a team of agents and a ground-scanning radar van will arrive on the grounds of Wayne Manor and present Alfred with a warrant for his arrest and a search of the premises."
True. If plans within plans weren't set in motion: Alfred gone; the Manson burned to the ground or all the necessary elements removed...

"This will occur at the exact same time as Tim Drake, Jason Todd, and Dick Grayson are brought into custody, and James Gordon upon getting notification of a pending warrant against his daughter, will take the day off to go try and convince Barbara to turn State's witness."
 True. If plans within plans weren't set into motion: All members of the Wayne family going into hiding; James eventually arrested for his lack of cooperation and previous assistance of the known fugitives.
"All identified suspects that were encountered during the surveillance will be swept up as well on that day."
 True. All "available/willing to speak" suspects will make statements.
"Wayne's excellent lawyer will have him booked and released on bail, at which point mysteriously enough a limo from the Themiscyran embassy will pick him up and he will not be seen again until he submits his US passport and a letter revoking his citizenship, and announces himself a citizen of the city-state of Atlantis.
When asked, they will plainly refuse extradition."
True. Some version of this will happen. However, this is when we leave the "Real World" point of the question. Although, the author's final note suggesting Batman will in the end evade capture, sentencing speaks loudly of his underling belief that Batman would somehow, real or fantasy, find a away to continue to beat the odds.

Monday, July 14, 2014

My SECOND KINDLE REVIEW!

From Amazon.com 

Thanks Jayra:

"Wade Garret's Genesis: Book One of the Kingdom Come is one of the most epic sci-fi books I've read this year. The characters are so realistic that they almost feel tangible. Although I feel that the dialogue can be improved (I think it's just me not being used to dialogue written like this), the characters' personalities are something I can actually associate with, which is great.

Though the novel is quite long, Garret's talent made me flip through my e-reader like a steam engine, almost non-stop, and I finished the book in a few days. However, the prologue with Black didn’t really catch my attention as much as the actual first chapter did, but I’m pretty glad that I didn’t drop the novel as the chapters after the prologue makes up for it.

With each scene painted in full colours and vividness, I can imagine each event happening in my head. If you like books with great detail, you will like how Garret explained his world from how the buildings line up on the road to how some characters choose to wear their clothing.

Even though I'm not usually a fan of past tense and third-person in writing, I was still astounded by the amount of detail and effort put in the making of this novel. The different point of views of the characters were confusing at first, when views switched from character to character, but I got used to it, and truth be told, I actually liked it.

All in all, this is one novel sci-fi fans shouldn't miss. Thanks Garret for sharing your story with us and I'm looking forward to the second book."